so so...
wow... I can imagine the hate mail from anti Anime animators already, although they should really try basing their knowledge on more then just shitty dubs in american.
Anywho I'm guessing you're not fluent in Japanese due to the really basic dialog which is fair enough, but you can't do a setup like a series with that angle unless you can keep up the Japanese or it's going to fall apart at the seams. Work on better jokes and your Japanese or try another flash movie angle that's easier to pull off... it's your call...